To make a recount better

LI. changing a recount to make it better
In writing we got into partners and make a recount about Kiwi can ,Kiwi sport and Music.
I chose to write about Kiwi can. Then we shared each others recount and we had to add words in your partners google doc. The words that are highlighted are the words my partner edit. My partner has 49 points and I had 17 points because I worked with one of the good writers in the class.